It's kind of irritating, because this guy got to have his say, and I got reduced to facts about pregnancy. I did make an attempt to keep the letter as neutral as possible, but to me, HIS letter wasn't neutral either.
But yes, a slightly lighter hand on editing (replacing YOUR with THE) could have preserved the actual point of the letter.
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It's kind of irritating, because this guy got to have his say, and I got reduced to facts about pregnancy. I did make an attempt to keep the letter as neutral as possible, but to me, HIS letter wasn't neutral either.
But yes, a slightly lighter hand on editing (replacing YOUR with THE) could have preserved the actual point of the letter.
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